[Wrtting][Exercise] TASK 1- BAR GRAPH

Task 1 (Practice) (Remember to note how long you spent on this task at the end of your piece.)
The graph shows students’ results on geography subject at Huong Thuy High school .
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
* You should write at least 100 words.
* You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Students’ result on geography subject at Huong Thuy High school.

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The bar graph indicates the outcome on geography exam of students at Huong Thuy High school in percentage. As can be easily seen, grade C surpassed others and the number of students got D mark accounted for the smallest one.

To be more detailed, the result of C grade was the biggest number, namely 33%. Besides, the second most popular letter grade was B, 29% in particular, which nearly doubled that of grade F. A and D scores took the least percentages of 12% and 10% respectively.

In sum, most of students gained the average mark (grade C) in the Geography test.
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This is the Student's’ result on geography subject at Huong Thuy high school.->[Should be changed :d]. The result was separated in 5 levels with 5 letters. They were A, B, C, D and F. Almost students gained the rade C. Especially, the rate of student gained grade F was higher the rate of students gained grade A.

To be more detailed, Students got letter C gained 33%. That was the highest rate. The second high rate was letter B, which accounted for 29%. Being ranked at the third position was letter F, which accounted for 16%. This rate was higher the rate of letter A with 12%. And the last one was letter D. That was smallest rate with 10%.

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This bar chart clearly presents student’s result on Geography at Huong Thuy high school.->[Should be changed :d]

In general, the percentage of students who get C mark is largest: about 33%, whereas the D mark only accounts for 10%. The gap between C grade and D grade is approximately 20%. Moreover, the A grade is 4% smaller than the F grade , in particular, the A grade stands at 12% and the F grade is about 16%. It is easy to see that the B grade is the second highest mark in this bar chart, which displays about 29%.

In sum, there is a little distance among these grades in this chart.

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[Kachusa] This one seems be good. I have no comment. ^^.
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This bar graph shows the mark of students on geography at Huong Thuy high school in percentage.There are 5 degrees of grade which represent 5 letter(s) A, B,C,D,F.
 To be more detailed ,the percentage of  students who get C grade is the highest one, namely 33%. The second high rate is B grade which  accounts for 29%. The A and F grade are 12% ,16% respectively. 10% is the percentage of students who get D grade, which calculates the least percentage.  

To sum up, almost students advance the C grade in the Geography test.  

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     This bar graph shows the student’s result on geography at Huong Thuy high school. In general, we can see some differences among students’ result.-> This sentence is not necessary.

According to the bar graph, we can see the letter D is the lowest one. It is only 10% of all. While letter C is the highest, it is 33%. Letter B's result accounts for the lower percentage in comparison with letter C's, namely 29% for grade B and 33% for grade C. Additionally, letter A is 12%, and letter F is 16 %.

this gives us a glimpse of the results of the students on geography.

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[Kachusa]